my GW at May 3

I went to trip to Nagasaki with my sister by bus. We gots on the bus at 9:00 am. It tooked about three hours. When I was in the bus, I saw the DVD. The DVD title is "hansamu su-tu".
After we arrived at Nagasaki station, we ate hot noodle in Kineya. It was very good taste. After that, we went to hotel by Tram. The hotel was near the atomic bomb fall heartland and Nagasaki Peace Park. We took check in the hotel and,put the luggage in our room. We went to Nagasaki Brick hall by tram. We attended a concert. It was very exciting and happy. After it ends, we went to Coco's a family restaurant, tooked the dinner. After that, we walked to hotel and bought to next day's breakfast. Arrived at our room, we ate and drink cake and juice. (146 words)